My first entry for a long time doesn't count as original, sadly, I just butchered some existing lyrics from an old metal track called [u]Evil Star[/u] by [u]Wolf[/u].

The song is here: [url][link]

The Original lyrics are here: [url][link]

As you can see the lyrics are fairly standard dungeons and dragons type stuff, so I thought it might be fun to write about a dominatrix instead.

[quote]
I lost all hope, I lost all faith
Never to be saved
My fate is darker than before
You are the flame, you are the fire
For this forsaken sinner
The beast in me is called to you

Evil Star
Take my heart
Dark descending majesty
Evil Star
Take my heart
My spirit burns with ecstasy

A demon child with a devil eyes
Black hearted girl
[b]Come night the fallen angel rides[/b]
I walk along and across the earth
I search and I seek
I search and seek the earth for you

Evil Star
Take my heart
Dark descending majesty
Evil Star
Take my heart
My spirit burns with ecstasy

Rivers red and forests blue
Show my love for you
Possessed to them - freedom to me
When you burn out and drift away
And day kills the night
Again I'm lost and cannot see

Evil Star
Take my heart
Dark descending majesty
Evil Star
Take my heart
My spirit burns with ecstasy
Evil Star
Dark descending majesty
[/quote]

There wasn't a lot wrong with the old lyrics, and I do apologize for rather lacking entry, but the subject was mundane. Think this any better? I'm trying to stick to the tune.

edit: the bold line one i want to change.